To me, the cover sounds slightly happy most of the time, maybe if you accentuated that, you could say something about how the original might change after a good ending of the game.Īnyway, it's always good to get stuff like this out there, so you can look at it (and have others look at it) from a different perspective. Also remember to think about the stories that a progression through different emotions can tell. Thinking about how to convey emotions in songs might be the next thing you need to do to improve your music. However, I feel like any song is going to convey some sort of emotion, if only a lack of it. It _is_ possible to make cool songs by just setting up a pattern and playing with it in interesting ways. I want to try to do that, but a bit better.' What were you thinking about while making this? It feels like the sort of song you end up with when your goal is just 'I'm going to make a song', rather than for example, 'I really like how Fallen Down expresses expresses the empty sadness of defeat, and slowly adds a bit of warmth, as if trying to tell you to stay determined. At the very end of the cover I feel like you got to an interesting place layering the sounds, but I feel like otherwise it's missing a purpose.

Undertale fallen down remix